Date: 2008-03-07 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myfieldnotes.livejournal.com
Wonderful job! Well done on getting Jack's tone. Also, I think the end line really makes the story as it shows that despite Jack's pain he's not truly alone anymore. It's a nice ending note emotionally to go out on.
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