superbadgirl: (turnout johnny and roy)
superbadgirl ([personal profile] superbadgirl) wrote in [personal profile] mrwubbles 2010-09-01 10:55 pm (UTC)

YOU ARE KILLING ME HERE!

It's all so incredibly tense you can taste it on your tongue, but little lines like this:

"We got men searching the premises for the b—for John," Vince told Cap in a quiet voice.

and the details of them seeing a green car smashed up, Roy giving it more than one look, those things really make a girl get anxious.

Then, finding Johnny should be a huge relief, but it's somehow not...

Eep!

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