ext_152721 ([identity profile] myfieldnotes.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mrwubbles 2008-03-07 03:31 am (UTC)

Wonderful job! Well done on getting Jack's tone. Also, I think the end line really makes the story as it shows that despite Jack's pain he's not truly alone anymore. It's a nice ending note emotionally to go out on.
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