Really liked the feel of this story. I think you captured Tony here really well, but also nailed down the whole feel of how the team interacts as well. The exchange between Gibbs and Tony about not second guessing was well done and felt like it could have been a sceen on the show.

Also, I as thrilled to see your author name @Yum - I loved your Stargate stories. It's good to know you've got other stories to tell!