I've often found that one of the most elusive things, in NCIS fanfics, is a proper characterization of Tony, that is both subtle and complex, and looks behind the mask, as well as showing his intelligence. Because it's not for nothing that he was senior agent for all those years, not to mention his time as a homicide detective.

Which is why I really appreciate your depiction of Tony, and his relationships with his team. As I was reading along, I thought to myself that I actually recognize this Tony. He's a genuine character, with all of the aforementioned complexity.

He's not overcome with buckets of tears, or a completely non-existent ego or sense of self. He's got his issues, naturally, but he's solid, and together, and he wants to look after his loved ones.

So what I found, in reading your story, is the feeling that we are peeking in on actual moments in our characters' lives. Which is what you want in a story, and a proper take on world-building.

So thanks very much for caring so much, and for sharing the fruits of your imagination. It's much appreciated. :)